Comments on: collaberation http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/2008/08/06/collaberation/ <a href="http://www.statcounter.com/" target="_blank"><img src="http://c42.statcounter.com/3574873/0/5fc8605f/1/" alt="web stats" border="0"></a> Fri, 13 Nov 2009 20:59:11 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Casey http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/2008/08/06/collaberation/#comment-821 Casey Fri, 08 Aug 2008 23:47:33 +0000 http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/?p=194#comment-821 You know, those lyrics won't work for the song I wrote, but I love them. I'm getting a sort of minimalist Willie Nelson early years idea out of it. The words are so straight forward that I think an ensemble environment, unless taken on by the most tasteful musicians ever assembled, would cloud it. I am going to use it. Clea: It is the lazy way out. I can't even leave decent comments lately. What I have been able to do is run a lot more and really make leaps and bounds on my lifting. I'm playing around with picking up a martial art in the next month or so. Now something like MMA or Mui Thai (I'm already a plenty good brawler), but something pretty and sort of useless. I want to take advantage of my discipline lately and develop it. Then when the writing muse returns, I'll have a new mind to deal with it. You know, those lyrics won’t work for the song I wrote, but I love them. I’m getting a sort of minimalist Willie Nelson early years idea out of it. The words are so straight forward that I think an ensemble environment, unless taken on by the most tasteful musicians ever assembled, would cloud it. I am going to use it.

Clea: It is the lazy way out. I can’t even leave decent comments lately. What I have been able to do is run a lot more and really make leaps and bounds on my lifting. I’m playing around with picking up a martial art in the next month or so. Now something like MMA or Mui Thai (I’m already a plenty good brawler), but something pretty and sort of useless. I want to take advantage of my discipline lately and develop it. Then when the writing muse returns, I’ll have a new mind to deal with it.

]]> By: Cléa http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/2008/08/06/collaberation/#comment-819 Cléa Fri, 08 Aug 2008 04:57:20 +0000 http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/?p=194#comment-819 Can't help with the song, I'm afraid. I too feel like I haven't written any good thing in a month. If creativity is stifled, why push it. Or is that the lazy way out? Can’t help with the song, I’m afraid. I too feel like I haven’t written any good thing in a month. If creativity is stifled, why push it. Or is that the lazy way out?

]]> By: anaglyph http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/2008/08/06/collaberation/#comment-817 anaglyph Fri, 08 Aug 2008 01:24:57 +0000 http://voxproletariat.wordpress.com/?p=194#comment-817 I wrote this ages ago. Use if you like. Change if you like. Discard if you like: <em>The Entropy Song Now there's no time for explaining As the conversation falters And the words all lose their meaning And the silence is expanding Now a pocketwatch is slowing And a filament is burning There's a line of thread unwinding And a spinning atom dying Now there's lipstick on the mirror And she's vanished in the city And her scent is disappearing And a burning heart is cooling Everything falls apart Everything falls apart, Everything falls apart in the end.</em> I wrote this ages ago. Use if you like. Change if you like. Discard if you like:

The Entropy Song

Now there’s no time for explaining
As the conversation falters
And the words all lose their meaning
And the silence is expanding

Now a pocketwatch is slowing
And a filament is burning
There’s a line of thread unwinding
And a spinning atom dying

Now there’s lipstick on the mirror
And she’s vanished in the city
And her scent is disappearing
And a burning heart is cooling

Everything falls apart
Everything falls apart,
Everything falls apart in the end.

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